THE KISS

It’s not quite Friday, but close enough for Friday Fictioneers.  We are hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields of Addicted to Purple.  We gathered every week to share fictions of 100 words according to a photo prompt.  You are welcomed to join in the fun.  Here’s my 100 words.

raindrops

PHOTO PROMPT – © Santoshwriter 

I remembered the last time he kissed me.  It was raining cats and dogs.  We were in a tight embrace, huddled under his big, black umbrella.  The kiss was long, sweet and wet as the raindrops falling around us.  I held onto him tight, trying forever, never letting go.

When will we see each other again? Will we ever see each other again?  What good are promises?  Oceans lay between us.  Continents separate us.  Years of history divide us.  Out of sight.  Out of mind.

So I held onto him, laid my face against his chest.  Teardrops kissed my cheek.

 

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About hafong

Hello! My name is (Leung) Hafong alias Lily Leung. You always say the last name first….that is the Chinese way. That is my partner lurking behind me. Since this is my blog, I won’t mention his name. But this is a rather cool picture. You see me and yet you don’t…sort of the way I feel about myself most of my life. So this blog is a self-exploration, an archeology dig of some sort. My tools…..words of a thousand or so at a sitting. I will try for that.
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21 Responses to THE KISS

  1. micklively says:

    Parting is such sweet sorrow.
    Good piece.

  2. Tears and rain.. they are always united

  3. Such a sweet and sad story with a lot of emotion! Excellent!

  4. The crazy thing about leaving is there are ALWAYS those questions! Very heartfelt piece.

  5. Lux Ganzon says:

    You’ll never forget your first kiss. 🙂

  6. Very romantic story. It’s hard to say goodbye.
    Tracey

  7. Bittersweet story! Saying bye is never easy! You have it well captured in the story!

  8. Dear Lily,

    Sweet and romantic piece. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

  9. phylor says:

    A lovely romantic tale. The romantic in me wants those oceans and years to disappear. Beautiful writing.

  10. Amy Reese says:

    Kisses in the rain are so romantic. I love the last line especially. Nice one!

  11. Lovely with great description, a mixture of rain and tears. At least there are still the memories of the love. Perhaps one day they’ll see each other again. Well done, Lily. — Suzanne

  12. gahlearner says:

    This is so beautiful in all its sadness, it will be the best of memories for the MC, even if they don’t see each other again. Fantasizing about what could have been can be uplifting, too.

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