THE MIST – Friday Fictioneers


Picture prompt for Friday Fictioneer:



I peered into the thickening mist calling his name.  Oh, where was he?  It was getting late and the mist was closing in.

I climbed onto the fence, trying to see further into the fog.  My heart was pounding.  I could hear it thudding in my ear.  Maybe I shouldn’t have come.  Maybe he was only playing with me.

Oh, what could I have been thinking!  So foolish!  So stupid!  I need to stop admonishing myself.  I have thrown caution to the wind.  I am committed to live my life.

No time to turn back.  I will trust and wait.


About hafong

Hello! My name is (Leung) Hafong alias Lily Leung. You always say the last name first….that is the Chinese way. That is my partner lurking behind me. Since this is my blog, I won’t mention his name. But this is a rather cool picture. You see me and yet you don’t…sort of the way I feel about myself most of my life. So this blog is a self-exploration, an archeology dig of some sort. My tools…..words of a thousand or so at a sitting. I will try for that.
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5 Responses to THE MIST – Friday Fictioneers

  1. lcrilley says:

    ohhh . . . what happens next??!!!!

  2. Is this a woman waiting for her lover to come, so she can elope with him? She’s escaping from a thankless life. But he isn’t showing up…

  3. Dear Lily,

    A lot of anticipation in this piece. I hope she’s not disappointed.

    Welcome to Friday Fictioneers.



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